by Michael Cheary
A personal statement is a great way to bullet point your achievements and help sell yourself to the hiring manager – but how do you write them?
Reading up on how to write a personal statement and looking over some personal statement dos and don’ts is a great way to start, but seeing real-life examples of personal statements can help keep you on the right track.
Not sure if you’re going in the right direction with yours? Here are some personal statement examples to inspire you:School leaver personal statement example
All personal statements should be tailored to the role in question, so use the job description to help write the rest. Why do you want to work in this industry? What skills make you applicable? And where do you want to go in your career? Answer these questions, and you’re off to a good start.
And, rather than focussing on achievements gained through employment history, put the emphasis on your studies and the skills you gained through education.
A highly motivated and hardworking individual, who has recently completed their A-Levels, achieving excellent grades in both Maths and Science. Seeking an apprenticeship in the engineering industry to build upon a keen scientific interest and start a career as a maintenance engineer. Eventual career goal is to become a fully-qualified and experienced maintenance or electrical engineer, with the longer-term aspiration of moving into project management.Graduate personal statement example
Similar to a school leaver statement, but with the extra attention paid to your higher education.
Once again, try and explain why you’re applying and where you’d like to go in your career, as well as the specific skills or knowledge you can offer.
And remember: a personal statement written for a CV differs greatly from one written for a university application. If you haven’t written one before, you should start by reading our tips on how to write a personal statement .
A recent business economics graduate with a 2:1 honours degree from the University of X, looking to secure a Graduate Commercial Analyst position to use and further develop my analytical skills and knowledge in a practical and fast-paced environment. My career goal is to assume a role which allows me to take responsibility for the analysis and interpretation of commercial data for a well-respected and market-leading leading company.Unemployed/redundancy personal statement example
Dealing with redundancy is never easy, but when dealt with in the right way, it needn’t be a hindrance when making applications.
Put the main focus on your employment history, and provide further information in your cover letter. Remember, your personal statement is intended to sell yourself. So emphasise your positives rather than apologising for a negative.
Driven Retail Manager with over ten years’ experience in the fashion industry. Proven track record of success, including managing the top performing store in the region, and having the lowest staff turnover rate of all UK outlets. Currently out of work due to company closure, looking for the right opportunity to bring my expertise to a well-established fashion brand in an upper management position.Career break personal statement example
There are many and varied reasons to take a career break, such as parental leave, plans to travel or long-term illness etc. Once again, leave any extra explanation for your cover letter and focus your personal statement on your career before your time off, and any skills learned during your time off which may be applicable to the role.
A highly motivated and experienced PA, currently looking to resume my professional career after dedicating the last five years to raising a family. Excellent admin skills, thorough knowledge of all Microsoft Office programs, as well as proficiency in minute-taking and extensive experience liaising with clients. After volunteering for one day a week with a local charity to refresh my skills, now fully committed to continuing my career on a full-time basis.Career change personal statement example
If you’re completely changing industry, think about which skills will be transferable and applicable to the sector you’re moving into. Once again, any numbers you can give to demonstrate your success could be crucial, even if you’re moving into an area where your expertise may seem slightly different.
As an experienced sales manager, my tenacious and proactive approach resulted in numerous important contract wins. My excellent networking skills have provided my team with vital client leads, and my ability to develop client relationships has resulted in an 18% increase in business renewals for my current organisation. After eight years in sales, currently seeking a new challenge which will utilise my meticulous attention to detail, and friendly, professional manner.Final thoughts
If you’re still not sure of what to write, don’t panic. Crafting a winning personal statement will take time, but if you read all the available advice, not to mention tailor it correctly to the role in question, it will be time well spent in the long run.
Its 2 am, I’m the medical officer on call, I just attended to an elderly man who presented with acute urinary retention secondary to prostatic hyperplasia. He would benefit from surgery. However, he cannot afford care at the private hospital I work. He has no health insurance, not even the largely inefficient health insurance provided by the National Health Insurance Scheme (NHIS). So following emergency therapy, which is free as stipulated by the new healthcare bill, I watched with an aching heart as he took his leave. Consequently, his options for surgical intervention are limited to the healthcare public sector, where overpopulated waiting rooms and overworked, under motivated staff await him.
The current state of public sector healthcare in Nigeria is a result of poor general management, gross mismanagement of funds, depreciating infrastructure and emigration of health workers as a consequence of poor incentives. As a result, health inequality, inadequacy of skilled staff, poor access to healthcare in the rural areas and a dysfunctional national health insurance scheme plague the system. High patient load and poverty of innovation and technological aid, further constrains the efficiency of this sector. Recently, a new health bill was signed into law in 2014, to tackle these and more issues.
The demand for healthcare is high. Accordingly, quality private healthcare is to a great extent unaffordable for the less privileged, as well as the middle class. The emergence of health management organisations and the increasing popularity of private sector health insurance have favoured the financial growth of the private sector over the last 5 years. Compulsory health insurance of company staff has made healthcare more accessible to the middle class. The technicalities of the HMOHealthcare Provider relationship, are currently driving a demand for appropriately educated administrators and hospital managers. Prior to this, most facilities are.
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essays, known as personalstatements . through sample essays. There are essays that actually provided good examples to guide them in writing personalstatements . However, there are sample essays that mislead high school students in writing supposedly good college admission essays, which turn out to be actual samples that were rejected by most colleges and universities all over the U.S. and United Kingdom. Most of these “bad” samples feature plagiarized statements . grammatical errors, and statements written in illustrative figures, like a human out of words. College and university admission committees reject these personalstatements not only because they lacked sense of professionalism but also enthusiasm of students who wrote them towards studying their chosen course in their aspired college or university. Bad samples of personalstatements are common in high school students because some students find these essays difficult to write in comparison to other ways in seeking admission to college, which are through entrance exams and awarded scholarships. Plagiarism is a main problem when writing these admission essays, especially when students who plagiarized statements from sample essays considered their actions as an easy way out to college.
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SupplyBag.co.uk aims to help supply teachers in all aspects of their work. Here, we look at your personal or supporting statement.
Writing a personal or supporting statement, after filling out a 10-page form already, and a covering letter, can seem very daunting.
Other applicants may have very similar experiences and qualifications to yourself. In your statement you need to be persuasive.
However, a supporting statement is your chance to shine.
Think about what you believe in / what you think makes a good teacher?
Now write examples of how you have put that into practice, without telling them that’s what you’re doing.
Tell them what you’ve done, how you did it, and how successful you were. What are you most proud of in your career so far?
Along with a few of my teaching friends, I came up with something like this as an opening paragraph:
Through this statement I will show what I consider to be the primary requirements for the post of class teacher. I will discuss what I believe I can offer in terms of my personal strengths, based not only on my view but also the views of a number of teaching professionals.
(The last part enables quotes from tutors/inspectors/heads etc.)
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The following supporting statement is in general circulation amongst the inboxes of students and is more specifically for a secondary school position.
Dear <Head Teacher>,
I write with reference to the vacancy for Teacher of Geography advertised in TES on Friday 19th November 2004. I am keen to be part of the geography department at because I would like the opportunity to enthuse young people about geography. I want to be a team player in a school, such as. where pupil success in learning and achievement is celebrated for each and every pupil.
Geography has always been my favourite subject; it offers the chance to explore the processes that form the world around us. I believe teaching pupils to understand physical and human processes advocates an appreciation of environments, places and people. With this ethos in mind I purposely chose a 50:50 split of physical and human modules to build a rounded geographical knowledge for my degree. Studies undertaken for my degree include glaciation in the mountains of Majorca, urban studies in Paris and Palma and agricultural practices in West Wales. Using this knowledge to teach geography at School Name would allow me to encourage pupils to navigate ‘unchartered’ waters, making them aware of the world around them.
Whilst on teaching practice, at Teaching Practice School Name and Current School Name, I taught various strands of the Geography National Curriculum at Key Stages 3 and 4. In addition I was also involved in A-level teaching at Teaching Practice School 2/3 Name. My professional relationship with Current School Name has continued into the new school year, when I accepted the position of teacher of geography. This post is a temporary maternity cover, which ends on Friday 26th November 2004.
Developing ideas and strategies has also included an exploration of a variety of teaching and learning styles, including didactic, group and pair work, use of textbooks and open-ended research. An example of this is a research project I conducted with mixed ability year 7 groups. The research was based upon the BBC’s list of top 20 places in the world to visit. During one lesson in the series pupils were encouraged to use ICT as part of their research, this activity had to be differentiated to accommodate the differing needs and abilities of each pupil. One method I employed in this situation was to encourage ICT confident pupils to ‘buddy’ with less confident ICT pupils, this method worked very effectively. I am keen to continue to develop my repertoire of strategies and methods at School Name, to ensure I can offer all pupils the opportunity to enjoy their education.
Throughout my teaching I have taken the opportunity to develop my own teaching ideas and strategies, especially in line with the literacy and numeracy strands of the Key Stage Three Strategy. Literacy is especially important in geography because it is necessary for pupils to be able to understand specialist geographical terminology in order to fully appreciate the subject. With this premise in mind I incorporate literacy into my lessons through defining key terms and offering guidance on how to structure reports, essays and other work.
Assessing pupils’ work is essential in encouraging them to progress and build upon their knowledge. I employ a variety of assessment methods to encourage this progress, and hope to continue developing assessment methods at School Name to ensure pupils build a sound geographical knowledge. Hand in hand with assessment is continual monitoring of pupil progression in the classroom, which is vital to ensure a positive, independent pupil-centred environment for learning.
The teaching and learning styles encompassing fieldwork are a key area of pupil progression that I am eager to be involved in at School Name, in order to enrich the learning experiences of the pupils, and make them aware of essential geographical research methods. I appreciate the location of School Name lends itself very well to fieldwork because there are a multitude of opportunities in the surrounding area that can be used to facilitate ‘hands on’ learning.
I want to work at School Name where there are opportunities to develop the use of ICT in a variety of ways, including producing resources, lesson planning and conducting research with pupils. I have used Interactive Whiteboards for a variety of teaching and learning activities including Power Point presentations, drawing diagrams and displaying aims. ICT has a positive effect on pupils and their learning; they are confident at working independently, able to access relevant information quickly and easily and have access to the most up to date knowledge available.
I also took the opportunity to teach GCSE Leisure and Tourism based on my relevant experience in the hotel industry, which I joined when I left university. I am able to use this experience in many contexts within the classroom, and beyond, and feel my specialist knowledge would be beneficial to School Name pupils because I could bring a new perspective to the teaching of the geography curriculum, especially in areas such as tourism, industry and citizenship, which are constantly being redefined.
Being a form tutor is an essential aspect of School Name’s school life I am keen to be involved in, because it allows time to get to know pupils away from the geography lesson. Form time is an opportunity to discuss many topical issues, such as the importance of being an informed citizen and acting responsibly. Whilst training at Current School Name I shadowed two forms, year 10 and year 8, the latter was handed over to me as year 9 when I began my employment at the school.
Acting in a pastoral role has affirmed my belief that education needs to be holistic as well as academic, which is why it is important for me to be able to meet pupils away from the geography classroom where I can assist them in forming their own beliefs, morals and codes of conduct within the context of existing school policies. I aim to use these beliefs and morals within the classroom to create a safe, secure and caring environment for all pupils to work in.
Extra-curricular activities and fundraising events are a fundamental part of School Name’s school life I am eager to be involved in because they help to pull the wider community together and consolidate the values of a rounded education. Activities I have experience of and would be prepared to get involved with at School Name include Badminton, swimming, handicrafts, public speaking and debating. At Current School Name I have been involved with preparing participants in the Duke of Edinburgh Award Scheme for their bronze award residential expedition, and I have conducted after school sessions aimed at pupils who want to improve their coursework.
I would like to finish this letter of application with my most important assets which I feel are essential to teaching successfully; a good sense of humour and fun and the ability to be understanding.You may also like -